Response to Second Peer Review

I had only one response to my essay. It pointed out a few, simple things for me to correct and I think there will be no problem in fixing them. The suggestions about grammar and MLA format will be the most important changes I focus on. My revision will consist of checking out the grammatical errors and seeing how those can be fixed. I will also go over the MLA instructions again just to be more familiarized with them before I submit my essay for grading. I do think the suggestions were helpful but it would have been more helpful if I had more than one response to do my revisions from. I always think it's good to have several "outside" opinions on a person's work. It's sometimes hard to see your own mistakes.